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The Emperor-Perfect Picture:

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WALT: I am learning to use Imagination to Draw-sculpt-colour-paint ans so much more!!!   The Emperor Perfect Picture: Imagine the camera zoomed out and you could see the whole penguin and everything around him.  Draw or describe what you could see. Thumbs up if it's good thumbs down if it need's improving!!!

The Owl:

WALT: We are learning to write descriptive pieces of writing His coal-black pupils, and an island set in a sea of molten gold, stared straight ahead of him. As he broke out into a run, his needle-like talons made a sharp, scraping sound against the lichen-covered rocks beneath him. The wind gusting behind him would be beneficial as he took his leap of faith off the cliff top. It was always a risky business, but when an opportune moment like this came around, he had to make it count. I loved writing this story because an owl is my favourite animal what your favourite animal ?

Trapped:

WALT: We are learning to write descriptive pieces of writing The heavy door of the cage swung shut and the iron bars echoed fiercely around. Menacing ravens circled around, their eyes transfixed on the trapped prisoner. How did she end up in this position? There was nobody around to help her. Barren land stretched as far as the eye could see. If she was to escape, she had to do it herself. Would you rather write or draw ?

The Mad Hatter

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WALT: We are learning to write descriptive peices of writing The Mad Hatter  - Story Starter He was a most peculiar looking chap….. Can you write a character description of the Mad Hatter? He was a most peculiar looking chap… He can be unpredictable, Fascinating but most of all he's MAD . The Mad Hatter can be very persuasive and his Emotions, well they are very surfaced. If I had to say what he might smell like I would say he smells like a dead cow perhaps several dead cows. As for his hair. It is something , because sometimes when I look at his hair I think of a gigantic orange porcupine just sitting on his head.  His white paint on his face which would probably taste like  a  white cat.  Have you ever watched Alice in wonderland ?

Waiting:

WALT:  I am learning to write discriptive writing In the early hours of the morning, when the sun was barely peeking its head over the trees that surrounded the lagoon, he lay there. Waiting. The vast creature slid through the water like a partially submerged submarine, the majority of its bulk hidden beneath the green-tinged water. It was a calm morning, and so the shiny surface of the lagoon reflected its surroundings like a window; a window that showed the true beauty of nature for those who looked into it. However,despite its beauty and serenity, the atmosphere in this place could suddenly change. Power, panic and noise could put an end to the peace. The vast creature waited. He had seen something. do you like to write ?

The white rabbit

WALT: I am learning to write discriptive peices of writing The White Rabbit. The White Rabbit held his gold pocket watch up, listening to the crisp, satisfying tick-tock as time hurried by. One of his long, white, fluffy ears twitched with the passing of every second. “We’re going to be late!” he exclaimed loudly. He always hated being late. “We’re late!” he repeated once again, this time placing the watch back in his hidden top pocket, dropping down to all fours and springing off across the ground. “Follow me!”  do you like RABBITS ?

The Invasion

WALT: I am learning to write descriptive stories. Many years ago, when I was just a small boy, we found a mysterious object washed up on the beach. It was a sort of silver-grey colour, and looked like a finger, only much, much larger. My friends and I had huddled together on the beach around the thing, holding our hands up to our faces to shield our eyes from the dazzling sun, talking excitedly about what it could be. Some hours later, after we had all made up wild stories about the origin of our new toy, we dragged the colossal item that was the size of our dining table up to the village. As we made our way slowly over the sand dunes, and the long, wispy grass that marked the end of the beach and the start of the fields, a crowd seemed to be gathering. Women and young children were leaving their houses, young lads were leaving tools and ploughs unattended in the fields, and rosy-cheeked men were stumbling out of the smoke-filled tavern, all hurrying with increasing urgency towards u...

Gardening

WALT: we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our class. This is work I have written and edited myself. It is a work in progress.    Under the bed: As D.J went to bed he heard a quiet Scuttling noise when D.J went to see  what it was D.J saw what looked like A flesh eating Monster So D.J dodged  under the bed like lightning to see there Cat  mitten 's.When D.J poked his head out to  see what the monster looked like he saw                                                    blue glowing teeth,Razor pink spik’s and a  fury purple tail AAAHH he said.The monster  heard  Him. Snatch the monster grabbed D.J and  Threw him to the ground as D.J stared at  the beastly monster thinking what kind of  monster would have blue teeth,pink spikes  and a purple ta...

Kalanis all about me

WALT: We are learning to post something on our blogs. All about me !!! My name is Kalani. I have 5 people in my family. I have 3 friends who are Lucas, Oscar and Brooklyn. I’m sure I’m going to get lots more. I have so much fun with my sisters. My sister Elena is so funny. That's why I don't like, but love her. My other sister Nova is so cute and always jumps on me. I love my Mum and Dad soooo much. Mum helps me even when she's busy. My Dad is so fun and loves going to different places with me. I also have a dog named zues and hes learning to play fech. By kalani What I found challenging was remembering what to do. What I enjoyed was to finally post something on my blog.