Gardening

WALT: we are learning to use descriptive vocab

in our class.

This is work I have written and edited myself. It is a work in progress.

  Under the bed:

As D.J went to bed he heard a quiet

Scuttling noise when D.J went to see 

what it was D.J saw what looked like

A flesh eating Monster So D.J dodged 

under the bed like lightning to see there Cat 

mitten 's.When D.J poked his head out to 

see what the monster looked like he saw 

                                                 

blue glowing teeth,Razor pink spik’s and a 

fury purple tail AAAHH he said.The monster 

heard 

Him. Snatch the monster grabbed D.J and 

Threw him to the ground as D.J stared at 

the beastly monster thinking what kind of 

monster would have blue teeth,pink spikes 

and a purple tail he blinked and everything 

went away he was on the floor. Breakfast 

his mum said it was a dream.

I found writing the story hard because I could't think what to write about.

Do you like to write?