The Owl:

By Anonymous -
WALT: We are learning to write descriptive pieces of writing


His coal-black pupils, and an island set in a sea of molten gold, stared straight ahead of him. As he broke out into a run, his needle-like talons made a sharp, scraping sound against the lichen-covered rocks beneath him. The wind gusting behind him would be beneficial as he took his leap of faith off the cliff top. It was always a risky business, but when an opportune moment like this came around, he had to make it count.

I loved writing this story because an owl is my favourite animal
what your favourite animal ?

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  1. AnonymousJune 5, 2020 at 8:15 AM

    Wow Kalani I really enjoyed reading your writing, My favourite animal is a Lion

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  2. AnonymousJune 15, 2020 at 1:02 PM

    Hi Kalani,
    I'm Lily from kakapo class. Great post. It was super interesting and I really enjoyed reading it. My favourite animal is a dog or puppy.

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